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Free Kindle Nation Shorts – February 10, 2011: An Excerpt from Class Collision: Fall from Grace, a novel by Annette Mackey

What does it mean when an indie novel comes out of nowhere to score a better than 4.9-star rating from 12 Amazon reviews?

Well, certainly no book is intended to please everyone, but I’ve got to say that when you look beyond the ratings and read the actual reviews for Annette Mackey’s sweet but nicely textured hi

Annette Mackey

storical romance Class Collision: Fall from Grace, she has accomplished something pretty remarkable for a first-time indie author.

The first rave review that I read was written by Avni, age 17, who couldn’t put it down, but then, when she finished it, she said “I passed it onto my neighbor for her to read. She read it in about three hours and was then banging on my door to talk to me about how amazing she thought this book was.”

By the time I got to the last review, it was clear to me that readers of all ages had found something special in this novel, and reviewer Margaret Williams put the icing on the cake when she shared this:

“The book is obviously written to a younger audience, and I am in my 80’s. Nevertheless, I found that it held my attention through all of the story. I loved the setting in the depression era. That’s when I grew up so that part of it was endearing to me. I especially liked the way the author described the emotional feelings of her characters. It felt real. I look forward to the sequel with great anticipation.”

Just so.

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Class Collision: Fall From Grace

by Annette Mackey  
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What if you didn’t know your boyfriend was worth millions

Born into wealth and privilege, David spends his days rattling the servants and torturing the maid until he is kidnapped for ransom and left for dead. Grueling years follow until he meets Linda.
She’s sassy, pigheaded, beautiful and way more than he can possibly handle. Hate, love and passion combine as he tries to win her heart. She sees him as a drifter. Little does she know he’s a prince in disguise.

Set during the Great Depression, Class Collision will transport you to a simpler time filled with heartache and unexpected love.

  
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An Excerpt from 
 

Class Collision:

Fall from Grace

a novel  by Annette Mackey      
Copyright © 2010, 2011 by Annette Mackey and published here with her permission

 

Chapter 7
The Collision

    It was dark and cold. David’s head rolled as he emerged from the blackness. For a minute he thought it had been a dream. Then, with a start, he realized that he was not home in his bed. He had been attacked! With every ounce of effort, he forced his eyes open and tried to focus. Odd. What were his shirt and tie doing there? He was not lying down, but rather his head was hanging as he sat in a chair. Ah, he thought, now it made sense.  
    Incrementally, he began to hear through muffled ears. Someone was crying, no … sobbing. Groggily, David raised his head, and it swayed in response. Alex was a few feet away, tied with a rope across his chest and his arms behind his back in a small wooden chair. Puzzled, he looked down at his own chest again. Strange, he had not seen the rope there before. Then he realized pain in his arms and wrists, a burning sensation that increased dramatically as he became more aware. He, too, was strapped from behind, but with what, barbed wire? Irritated, he wondered why his antagonists had stretched his arms so tightly. Didn’t they realize the job could have been done without causing so much pain? And what was this rope drawn down across his legs for? Were they going on a Ferris wheel? Really!
    Nearly fully awake, he looked at Alex who was sniffling. David felt a surge of anger. Crying at a time like this was not going to help matters. Irritated, he looked away.
    “I’m sorry,” Alex said with a quiver.  
    David swung his head back around, and it flopped in response from the lingering drugs.
    “I’m sorry I didn’t listen when you said you were scared.” Alex started to cry harder, despite his obvious effort to control his voice.
    Although he was embarrassed for Alex, David was suddenly more embarrassed for himself as he recollected the way he had acted. Hearing Alex verbalize it was even worse. Wanting to change the subject he spoke. “Do you know what’s going on, Alex? Who were those men, and what do they want?”
    “I don’t know,” Alex trembled. “I only woke up just a few minutes before you. I don’t know anything.” Alex sniffled as a few more tears dribbled.
    If he hadn’t acted so peculiar himself, David might have word-lashed Alex right out of his hysteria, but seeing as he had just met those unwelcome emotions, he decided to let it go. Instead, he looked around the room hoping for a clue. Just then, Alex burst out.
    “What’s going on here, David? Obviously you know something. You’re the one that said we shouldn’t go down to the car!”
    “Shhh!” David shot back. “They’ll hear you.”
    “Who? Who’s going to hear? David, you had better let me in on this or so help me-“
    David cut him off in a loud whisper, “I have no idea, Alex! But I’ll tell you one thing, it’s pretty dumb to sit here crying about it.”
    “Oh sure, now you’re the tough guy. You little wimp. I saw you! You were shivering like a chicken liver.”
    “Fine, Alex, I was scared as a chicken liver,” David emphasized. “Are you happy now?”
    Sheer raw emotion had taken over. “Act like it was nothing. I’ve never seen anyone so terrified in my entire life.”
    David glared at his words. “Will you just stop so I can think?” He tried to keep his voice down, but like Alex, he, too, was tense. The combination of the situation and the lingering drugs blurred his mind in a most unsettling manner.  
    “You’re just a big phony,” Alex snarled. “I heard you whimpering at the conservatory, and I’ll never let you forget it. You treat everybody as if they were nothing. But you’re no better.”
    Alex continued to rant, but David didn’t care. They were in trouble, and somebody had to take the lead. He noted how dark it was outside and wondered how much time had passed. He thought of Clifford’s reaction when he had buried the Spanish coins and wondered if his parents had been informed yet. Poor Mother. She had been through enough to last a lifetime.
    Alex’s ranting continued. “… You think you’re so special, so much better than the rest of us. Well, let me tell you something, mister, you’re just the same as everybody else. The only differences is that you’ve never had to deal with anyone so spectacularly and magnificently irritating. That’s why you can’t understand how other people feel. And what’s more, you’ve got no social skills! None whatsoever. You think you’re so superior, but you’re not! Oh, except that, of course, you’re really good at playing the puppet and, well, I hate to be the one to break it to you because it’s going to come as a total shock, but you’re totally stuck-up and irritating and downright rude with your I’m better than you attitude …”
    “Oh, brother,” David spat. Alex had to take this opportune time to fall to pieces. Great. Just great. It looked like David was going to have to figure things out on his own. He turned his attention back to the inside of the room. The floor was tile, and there were several desks shoved against the far wall. As his senses awakened, he became painfully aware of a miserable rotting stench, like molding socks. Err … At least it smelled the way he imagined dirty socks would smell. Having never smelled such a thing, he was left to his imagination.  
    Frustrated, he pulled at his arms. This hurt! How was he supposed to concentrate when his arms were slowly being pulled from their sockets?
    “Can you see anyone out that door?” David whispered, interrupting Alex who was still in the process of venting every real and imagined oppression that he had ever endured in his life.
    Surprised, Alex stopped. “Uh … ” he sputtered, startled back to reality.  
    “Well?” David pressed.
    Alex stretched his neck as far as he could. “No,” he whispered still craning. He had been so busy ranting that he had totally lost track of the current situation.  
    “They must not be here, or they would have come when they heard us talking,” David reasoned aloud as he tried to scoot his chair toward Alex’s. His unknown adversary had tied each foot very tightly to a different leg of the chair. Only his toes reached the floor, making each inch gained with a wince of pain. His unaccustomed body immediately set his brain to work on the abuses he would inflict on his abductors once they were brought to justice. Chinese water torture for one. He heard it was quite effective.
    “Why do you think they took us? I mean, brought us here like this?” Alex asked. “We haven’t done anything. Have … have you … done anything?”
    Sometimes David wondered at Alex. How could he be the oldest? He was so stupidly naїve. “They probably kidnapped us for ransom.”
    “Kidnapped? They kidnapped us?”
    David stopped his efforts momentarily to give Alex an even bigger look of dismay. “What would you call it?”
    “Well … I don’t know. I guess … I … didn’t think,” he admitted.
    “I’ll say.” Then in irritation he shot out, “Do I have to do all the work here? Maybe you could work toward me too.”
    Understanding smacked across Alex’s face, and he immediately sprang into action, if you could call scooting inch-by-inch “springing.”
    After a few minutes of agonizingly slow progress, they were in position, back to back. “Okay,” David whispered, “hold still while I try to untie you.”
    “Are you sure this is such a good idea?” Alex began to doubt the intelligence of the plan. “What if they come back? I don’t think they’ll be too happy to catch us like this.”
    “Be quiet and concentrate,” David ordered.
    “I’m holding still, how much concentration does it take?”
    “Then pipe down so that I can concentrate!”
    “You know, David, Mother would never believe what a pain you really are. Have you ever noticed that you never listen to anybody but yourself? Oh no. You’ve always got to be in charge. You are two years my junior, and it gets annoying! Even now, when we are both tied up, who gives the orders? David, always David. I’ve about had it.”
    “Could you pleeeease?”
    “You see? Still giving orders!”
    “For Pete’s sake. I think you’re trying to be difficult.”
    “Don’t turn this around on me!”
    “How much effort does it take? You press your lips together and voilà, closed mouth, hence silence.”
    David continued to work on the ropes as they argued. Despite the quarrel, he did make some considerable progress. Unfortunately, and unbeknownst to them, an exterior door had opened and shut during the course of their argument, giving an advantage to the unforgiving stranger that was now upon them.
    “What’s this?”
    Alex and David both looked up to see a tall, unkempt man with sandy hair standing in the doorway wearing tattered brown pants and suspenders that rolled over a once-muslin shirt. David recognized him immediately as the man who had pulled him inside the car.
    “Why you lit’le weasels,” the man whom they would come to know as Willy spoke with a broken English accent. “Eh, Beez, we got ourselves some ‘neakers here, we do.”
    A shorter, heavier man with dark hair came into the room. The very man who stood watching that day when David insulted the beggar woman and her child.  
    Beez wore suit pants and a white shirt with several buttons undone at the top and sleeves rolled to the elbows. A cigarette hung from his mouth as he leaned one hand on the doorframe. Rolling the cigarette with his lips, he summed up the situation. His voice was soft and gritty. “So here you are, back to back. That’s not the way we left ya,” he said as he paced circles around the boys. “What’s a matter? Ya sick o’ lookin’ at each other?” He spoke with a thick Brooklyn accent.
    David looked directly into the man’s dark eyes and protruded his chin in challenge. Alex preferred to look at the floor, hoping beyond hope that his lack of eye contact would dismiss him from the conversation.
    “Huuhhh?!!” the man shouted.
    By raising his voice, David surmised that they were in the country, away from eager ears.
    Beez’s volatile temperament was on the verge of exploding. “Just what do you think you was doing?”
    “That’s just what I was about to ask you.” David spoke with authority. “I demand you release us. Now!”
    Beez inhaled deeply then flicked the smoldering cigarette across the floor, the butt still glowing as it came to a spinning stop. He crouched and breathed the soot into David’s face causing his eyes to water as he coughed.  
    Beez remained inches from his face, studying, until without warning, he threw David’s chair across the room in a single heaving motion. The chair landed at an angle on two legs as it screeched and teetered to the floor with a crash on its side. Unable to compensate, David’s head clunked down with a sickening thud on the tile.
    “That’s where I left ya,” Beez proclaimed and pulled a fresh cigarette from his pocket. “Rich brat,” he muttered as he turned for the door. He snapped his fingers at Willy. “Take care o’ the other one,” he said as he left.
    Willy’s eyes had glazed over as if watching a scene at the theater. Instantly, he snapped and tightened Alex’s ropes as Alex let out a soft grunt of pain. Then Willy unleashed a painful smack across Alex’s face with the back of his hand. Alex’s head jerked to one side from the impact. Satisfied, he went to David and cinched his ropes tighter before turning to leave. With obvious satisfaction, he left David lying motionless on the cold tile floor.
    Alex stared at the closed door then back at David, then at the door again. Finally, he whispered. “Are you all right?” His voice was breathy and hoarse with fear. The only light came from beneath the door. “David?” Alex pressed. He couldn’t call any louder for fear that the men would return and with that thought he started to hyperventilate. “David,” he continued to whisper as he breathed in heaps.
    David’s head was spinning, leaving him unable to answer. Halfway between two worlds, the conscious and unconscious, and still swimming in a sea of lingering drugs, he couldn’t manage a word. He felt the warmth of acid threatening in his mouth as it spilled in his throat. The smoldering cigarette that lay near his face only made matters worse.
    “David …” Alex continued to huff in hyperventilation. “David … are you okay?”
    “I’m fine,” David finally managed to muster. No matter how bad the pain, he couldn’t stand the idea that Alex might learn of it. He was tied to a tipped chair with ropes tearing at his flesh, his head reeling from the combined assault of trauma and drugs and the fear of imminent vomit. This was bad, and Alex wanted to know if he was okay? No. He was notokay, but he wasn’t going to say it.  
    He closed his eyes and imagined the Virginia coastline with a cool ocean breeze. Mind over matter, mind over matter, that’s all it takes. Mind over matter. A few minutes later, his mind lost the matter as he puked it from his guts in heave after heave. Thankfully, there wasn’t much to expel. They hadn’t eaten since breakfast so the putrid regurgitation was mostly water and acid with an occasional lump here and there.
    Alex looked on in horror through the darkness. “I don’t think you’re okay,” he commented dryly, turning his head so that he wouldn’t join in vomiting as David heaved again and again. “Nope nope,” he said shaking his head against the malodorous smell. “Definitely not okay.”
    When it was over, David tried to rest his head, only to realize that doing so would settle him right in the middle of the puddle of vomit. “Fresh mountain snow, big puffy clouds, cool autumn breezes,” he mumbled to himself. It was a difficult process. The acidic soup lay only inches from his face. To his grave misfortune, the idea that he would be sleeping in it combined with the smell made him heave again … And again … One more time.
    The muscles in his abdomen ached from the pressure as the violent process wreaked havoc. What he wouldn’t give for the use of his hands. It would be worth every single last Spanish coin. At this point, for a damp, soothing washcloth, he would even throw in his loyal feline. This drip-dry business was no fun at all. Where was Clifford when he needed him? And Mother … she would wipe his sweaty forehead with a cloth and talk in soft, soothing tones. He thought of how she would rub his arms down as he lay on the bed and pictured her silken hair shining in the glow of a dim lamp. Reluctantly, he released the tension in his neck and let the upper half of his head rest in the pool. With a grimace, he closed his eyes against the odor. The room was still turning. Wishing it to be still, he opened his eyes. No such luck. Halfway around, then back again. Too tired. Too tired … He rested back as the smell drifted. Sleep … was all … he … wanted.
    Alex couldn’t understand why David had thrown up. And sleep? It was unbelievable and totally unfair. What a brother! Bossy, pretentious, proud, and able to sleep in any position.  
    “There I go again,” he chastised. “I’ve got to stop.” His penny-ante side was taking over again, but it was hard to believe that some part of this wasn’t David’s fault. Nobody liked him. He must have done something to someone. He must be to blame. He must.
    But then, he was Alex’s best friend.

Chapter 8
Maniac
   

Friday before Thanksgiving, 1931 …
    Dawn approached and with it, the revelation of the grungy state of their new residence. The building was noticeably run-down with piles of junk heaped everywhere. There was a puddle of water near where David lay, remnants of the last rain, and what looked to be a bunch of desks the night before was really three desks piled amidst rubble and demolition waste shoved along the opposite wall.  
    Between the boarded windows, thick grime, and soot, Alex could see a field of sorts, one which looked long-since abandoned, with an old tractor rusting under a nearby dead tree.
    Just then, David moaned. Since he had been doing that all night, Alex wasn’t sure if it meant anything. He moaned again, and then spoke.  
    “Is it morning?”
    “Yes. How are you feeling?” Alex tried to sound concerned. Through the course of the night, his sympathy for David had grown, partly out of guilt and partly out of duty.
    David raised his head a few inches. The vomit had dried in crusty clumps that stuck to his hair like bad gel from the dime-store sales rack. The area of his head that had been resting in the pool was still damp and dripped slightly.  
    “Awful.”
    “Yeah, well, you don’t look so good either.” Alex’s own wrists were throbbing. He couldn’t imagine how David’s must feel.
    David set his head back down. “Do you have any idea what time it is?”
    “I think it’s about eight o’clock.”
    “I wonder what everyone is doing at home.”
    “Probably eating breakfast. Boy, what you won’t do to get out of oatmeal,” he teased, hoping to lighten the moment.
    David tried to force a laugh. Even that hurt.
    A few minutes later the door creaked open and Willy stepped in. He smelled the vomit right away. “Aghh! What the? Uuugh … uuuyee oiy,” he pinched at his nose as he fled the room.
    It wasn’t long before the shouting started as the men argued over the situation. The need for the remote location was becoming more apparent all the time.
    Alex stared at the door in disbelief. He had never heard two grown men behave in such a manner. After several shouts and multiple threats Willy returned with his nostrils flaring. Beez was obviously the one in charge. Either that or he was the bigger bully.
    “I ain’t cleanin’ it up, I’ll tell you at right now,” Willy complained. “No sir. I ain’t doin’ it. No matter how much money.”
    He tipped David’s chair up right, and David shuddered from the pain, especially when the legs of the chair clunked down, distributing a shock to every nerve in his body. Willy continued to rant as he untied David’s ropes, none too gentle. One would assume that being released after such a long ordeal would be a welcome experience. It wasn’t. The pain was unbelievable. The bristly cords yanked and pulled, sending twine micro slivers into David’s open wounds with each merciless jerk.  
    “You sir, you’re the one ‘at gets the job. Stupid bloke.”  
    With each tug David braced. He had to keep up the front. These men were nothing to him. Nothing! And he wanted to be sure that they knew, that he knew, that he was better than them. Even if it killed him.     
    Once untied, Willy shoved David from the chair to the floor. He fell, nearly landing on his face with his knee in the puddle of muck. As he tried to get up, the realization of what his body had been through became more evident.   
    “Hurry up, you little brat ‘for I rub your whole face in it!”
    His aching ankles couldn’t manage his weight as he tried to get up, sending him to the floor. For the first time he saw his hands and wrists. The injuries were infuriating, which gratefully did the trick. New strength poured into every facet of his body, and he rose to his feet, settling into a stance of perfect posture. The skin around his wrists was raw, thick, and swollen with deep purple bruises. Blood stained his shirt cuffs. His suit coat was rumpled with splats of vomit here and there, and blood had run thick into the creases of his hands where it dried in crusts. All of this added steam to his anger, and he stood with more pride and determination than he had in his entire life. Even though David was a child with his hair askew, Willy stepped back, completely intimidated. Unfortunately, the effect didn’t last long. In an instant, Willy regained his senses and pulled at David’s ear.
    “Come on, you.”  
    Willy kept a hold of David’s ear and dragged him down the dilapidated hallway to a double door where he shoved it open and tossed David down the exterior steps. David lost his footing and fell most of the way to the ground. Despite the tumble, he was elated to be free. The fresh air instantly dispersed the haunting nausea.
    “There. You see that bucket?” Willy ordered. “You get that buck

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Meet Mad Mick Murphy, a freelance journalist sleuth you won’t be able to turn your back on, in Michael Haskins’ thriller Chasin the Wind – A Mad Mick Murphy Key West Mystery Novel.
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Chasin’ the Wind nails the colorful and often violent action in both Key West, Florida, and Havana, Cuba. It navigates corruption and small town politics in the southernmost city of the United States.


It bumps into a scheme to topple Cuba’s communist government and throws Cuban exiles and military deserters, neurotic federal agents, plus a few unique Key Westers into a brew that promises international repercussions.

When officials sworn to uphold the law try to subvert it in Key West, journalist Liam Michael “Mad Mick” Murphy is compelled to react. He and a ragtag group of citizens confront failed justice, but are left with only revenge as an option. Except, perhaps a renegade deal with the Cuban government. Dodging treachery, Mad Mick Murphy goes headlong toward treason, dragging his team of “typical” islanders deeper into the mess they wanted to eliminate. 

My second in Mick Murphy Key West Mystery will be available mid Feb. 2011. “Free Range Institution” reunites the characters in “Chasin’ the Wind” as they run and hide from a corrupt city commissioner and DEA Agent and they do this while trying to stop a seaplane full of drugs from coming into Key West.

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From the Author:
 My mystery novel is fiction, but Key West looms in the background, the bars and restaurants and many of the characters that run through its pages are taken from real life. If you have visited the island, you will know this. If not, come on down and see for yourself.

I moved to Key West to sail and today I own a 1973, 36-foot Amel sloop. With friends, I have sailed to Cuba four times and flown from Miami once. Much of what I learned about Cuba is in my novel. 

In my writing, I have tried to be faithful to the island and its businesses. I should remind you that my story is fiction, because crime as I write it does not happen in Key West. We are a long way from the mayhem and gangs of Miami, but with a vivid imagination, I have been able to create the situations needed for a political-murder mystery.

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In Teresa Burrell’s novel The Advocate’s Betrayal, Sabre Orin Brown is a legal advocate for children in the San Diego justice system.  
She witnesses her share of horror every day.  
Every now and then, that horror gets personal.
The best legal thrillers have us sitting on the edge of our seats long before the action ever enters the courtroom. As an attorney, an advocate, and an author, Teresa Burrell weaves experience and imagination into a terrifying 5-star tale that reviewers are calling “legal suspense at its finest.”
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When Sabre’s friend Betty calls one morning with the shocking news that her husband was murdered in his sleep, Sabre makes it her mission to find the killer. The cops suspect Betty, and Sabre has no leads. It would be easier if Betty wasn’t hiding something, but even after she gets thrown in jail, she refuses to say a word about her past and the mystery that chased the couple across the country and ultimately hunted her husband to his death.
Sabre can’t put her own life on hold, either. She is still trying to protect the two children on her caseload whose parents have brainwashed them with a violent racial hatred. Even more, she’s also still recovering from the horrific events of the previous year, when a stalker burned her home to the ground. Life never gets easy, but at least Sabre is not alone. She has the comfort of her calm and stable boyfriend, Luke, and the help of good friends.
But when a private detective, JP, follows the murder from Betty’s empty trailer home to a small town in Texas and a nightclub in Chicago, it starts to seem like finding the answers may be more dangerous than ever. Only one thing becomes remarkably clear: When the people closest to you have so much to hide, you can’t trust anyone.
 
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 “What distinguishes the Advocate series from other books is that these legal thrillers are being written by a real lawyer. I’m so tired of all the generic legal dramas/comedies/etc series filling a reader’s head with such a fictional view of the judicial system. Thank you Teresa for getting it right for a change!” –Ann Onimuss
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A Novel  by Theresa Burrell 
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Prologue
Pain, from a sharp knife plunged into his chest, yanked John out of a deep sleep. He forced his eyelids open. The only thing worse than the pain was the shock when he saw who was standing over him. It wasn’t until the blood dripped on his face that he realized it was not a dream.
            “No, no, not you….” John reached out, hitting his hand against the wall. He tried to speak again, but could only mumble. “Our Father, who art in heaven…”
The killer mockingly said, “Are you praying, old man? Here, use this….,” tossing John’s rosary at his open hand near the floor. It caught on his fingertips and dangled there. John felt his air diminishing as his lungs filled up with blood. He fumbled his fingers until his thumb and index finger clasped the first large bead, the words no longer audible. “…hallowed be Thy name…”
His attacker stepped back, gazing at him lying there, holding the knife dripping with blood, his blood. John reached for his chest, but his arm wouldn’t move. “…Thy kingdom come…” The naked walls of the trailer felt like a box. They were so close on every side. It was stifling. This was his box, his cage, his coffin. The only illumination came from the front room. He listened as the footsteps echoed back and forth at the end of his queen-size bed that filled the room, leaving less than a foot on each side. And then he heard the rubber soles of the shoes exit the bedroom.
            He heard water run. His backside felt wet. Was it water? No, the water came from the kitchenette; blood pooled around his body. John heard his assailant washing away his blood in his kitchen -his murderer washing away the evidence. “…Thy will be done, on earth as it is in heaven…”
Footsteps returned to John’s bedroom, and with them returned his fear. Was the attacker returning to finish the job? John couldn’t protect himself; he couldn’t even move. Then the fear subsided. It was too late. The damage already done. “…Give us this day, our daily bread, and forgive us our trespasses…”
The floor creaked all the way to the front door. Click-door unlocked, opened. The lights went out in the front room, completely dark, or was it the light in his mind that ceased? The pain in his chest intensified. His body felt lethargic. The front door closed. John listened carefully-no lock. The trailer shifted when the last step was vacated. He was alone, left to die alone.
            John tried to move, to struggle, to fight, but his body wouldn’t budge. He saw his life-the despicable parts when he was a kid, the pain he inflicted on others-but mostly he thought of the man he had become. The man who tried his whole life to fix what he had done as a child, that’s who he really was. It pained him to have to think he would suffer eternal damnation for the crimes he committed so long ago. Was this his punishment-betrayal, death, eternal damnation? “…as we forgive those…”
   
Chapter 1
When the phone rang at four o’clock in the morning Sabre knew it could only mean trouble, but she was used to trouble. “Who screwed up now?” she mumbled, forgetting for a second Luke lying in bed next to her.
“Umm…,” Luke groaned.
Sabre savored the smell of clean sweat and faint cologne, reliving the touch of his mouth on the nape of her neck and his hard body holding her, making love to her for the first time. It had been a long time coming. She struggled to find the phone on the nightstand, knocking over a glass of wine. “Damn it,” she mumbled. When she put the phone to her ear, she heard her friend Betty breathing heavily and stammering over her words as she tried to speak. Sabre’s heart quivered in her chest.
            “He’s d..dead. John’s dead,” Betty cried.
            “Betty, where are you?” Sabre’s heart beat faster. She felt a sick feeling in the pit of her stomach.
            “At home. Th…there’s so much blood.”
            “What happened?”
            “I don’t know.”
            “Are you hurt?”
            “No.”
            “I’ll be right there.” Sabre’s arm felt weak. She dropped the phone to her chest and lay there for a second, her body still and in shock. Luke reached his arm around her waist and pulled her shapely naked body close to him, nibbling on her earlobe. Sabre yanked away, throwing his arm off her and slamming the phone into the cradle. “Not now,” she said curtly, but with no anger in her voice. She stood up and flipped on the light.
            “What is it?” Luke asked, scratching his head as he sat up.
            “John’s dead.” She snapped, sounding more like a question than a statement, propelling Luke from the bed. “I’m going to help Betty.” She stepped into her jeans, wrestling with her sweatshirt as she pulled it over her head, twisted her shoulder-length, brown hair up on top of her head, and stuck a clip in it.
            Luke had his shirt on before she finished speaking, looking around for his pants and shoes. “I’m going with you.” He reached for her arm, squeezing it lightly. “I’m so sorry, Sabre.”
            Tears filled her dark brown eyes. John and Betty were her friends, and although Sabre was about thirty years their junior, they had grown very close. They were extended family, more like an aunt and uncle to her. They had been there for her during her turmoil last year, and now John was dead and Betty needed her.
            The summer morning air felt cool on Sabre’s tear-filled face as she ran to the car. “Put your keys away. I’m driving,” Luke said. Sabre’s hand shook as she opened the door to Luke’s silver metallic BMW Z4 Roadster.
            Luke drove east on I-8 at speeds above eighty. Sabre didn’t complain about the speed as she would have under normal circumstances. She didn’t even notice. She watched as the buildings passed her window, most of them barely visible without their lights on. Only a few cars on the freeway, but too many she thought. Where were they going? How many were going to help a friend whose husband had just died? Why John? It felt like losing her father all over again, and a piece of her brother, Ron, as well. Ron had introduced her to John and Betty just a few months before his disappearance. The couple had been such a great help to her, consoling her and always trying to keep her hopes up. John reminded her so much of her father-the same lighthearted strength that is so hard to find in a man, and a deep, resonant voice that always brought her comfort. She’d never hear that voice call her “Sparky” again. He tagged her with that nickname the first day they met, and he never called her anything else. Sabre remembered that day. The couple was always holding hands, only letting go when Betty went to get John a cup of coffee – before he ever asked – or when John went to check the gas in Betty’s car. They took care of each other.
            Luke and Sabre drove for about two minutes without speaking. Luke broke the silence. “What happened? Do you know?”
            “No, she didn’t say, just that he was dead…and there was blood.” Sabre shook her head. “What will Betty do without him? She loved him so much. She used to say, ‘I’d like you to find someone just like my John, but there’s no one quite like him.’ That’s why she tried so hard to get us together, you know.”
            “I know.” Luke squeezed her hand. “I’m glad she did.”
            Within fifteen minutes of the call, they had driven into the motor home park and pulled up in front of space number twelve, a thirty-five foot, twenty-year-old trailer, the only home in the park with lights on. As they stepped out of the car, the lights went on next door. No light illuminated Betty’s porch. Luke took Sabre’s hand as they went up the short, dark walkway. She couldn’t see much, but she could smell the gardenias along the path. Just as they reached the door, the porch light went on and Sabre heard the click of the door unlocking. She felt an ache in her stomach when she saw Betty’s puffy eyes with black liner smeared down her face, her usual perfectly spiked, fire-red hair flat on one side and the rest sticking out in clumps, and the deep lines of confusion on her forehead. What had once been white kittens on the side of her pale blue pajama top were now soaked red with blood. When Sabre hugged her friend’s plump body, it felt listless and tears dampened Betty’s cheeks.
            “Where is he?” Luke asked.
            “In there.” Betty pointed to the bedroom.
Luke walked to the back of the trailer, his body tall and straight. Sabre could see the muscles strain on the back of his neck as she and Betty followed. Sabre noticed Betty held a rosary. As far as she knew, Betty wasn’t Catholic. She stopped and put her arm around Betty’s shoulder. “Were you praying?” she asked motioning toward the rosary.
Betty slipped it in her pocket and said, “It belonged to J…John. The only thing he had from his childhood.”
They walked into the bedroom, Luke several steps ahead. “Oh…” Sabre covered her mouth to stifle her cry. John lay on his back, the blankets pulled up to his waist. His right arm hung over the edge of the bed, the left side of his chest covered in blood. Sabre suddenly longed for her strong, energetic friend, John. She wanted him to comfort her. This wasn’t him. A lifeless, slaughtered body laid in his bed, no longer the man who gave her fatherly advice or comforted her when she needed to feel like a child.
Luke put his arm around Sabre. He reached down and touched John’s arm. “He’s cold,” he said.
“Have you called the police?” Sabre asked.
“No.”
“Why not?”
Betty started to sob, “I didn’t kn..know what to do. So, I called you.”
Sabre walked over to where Betty stood in the doorway, her voice low and undemanding. “Betty, what happened?”
“I…I don’t know.”
Sabre reached out and took Betty’s hand. “Tell me, what did you do when you left us at Viejas?”
“I came straight home and went to bed.”
“You just crawled into bed next to John?”
“I thought he was sleeping, so I kept very quiet.” She gulped. “I didn’t even turn on the light in the bedroom. I just put my pajamas on and slipped into bed beside him.” Sabre nodded encouragement. “I went right to sleep because he wasn’t snoring.” Betty stopped to catch her breath and shook her head from side to side. “He always snores. Why didn’t I know there was something wrong?” She sobbed. “I was so thankful he wasn’t snoring, I didn’t even check on him.”
Sabre squeezed her hand a little tighter. “Betty, when did you know there was something wrong?”
“When I got up to go to the bathroom, I felt my wet, sticky pajamas. I…I turned on the light and saw it was bl..blood. Then I saw John.” Betty’s chest throbbed as she continued to sob. “He just lay there all covered with blood.”
“Betty, we need to call the police.”
“W…would you?” Betty took a step forward, then back, then stood there rocking, confused.
“Of course.”
Sabre called 9-1-1, and within minutes three squad cars arrived, plus two detectives in an unmarked car and an ambulance followed by a coroner. The dawn broke as neighbors exited their mobile homes to catch a glimpse of the show, many of them watching from their porches, others edging closer and forming a crowd near Betty’s and John’s trailer. They stretched their necks to see. Some asked questions of the officers, others relayed what they saw and what they speculated, but all buzzed with curiosity as the police put up the yellow and black ribbon partitioning off the area.
One man wandered onto the green rock lawn. “Please step back,” a short, young man in uniform said curtly. “Please stay behind the police line.”
A police officer entered the motor home, glanced around, and started spouting orders like he was reading from a bad script. “I need everyone to step outside. This is a crime scene. Please don’t touch anything.”
“Sabre, what are you doing here?” Detective Gregory Nelson asked, as he walked up to the mobile home while pulling on his tie.
“These are friends of mine. Betty called me.”
“I’ll want to talk to you, but first I need to go inside. Please wait out here.”
Betty stumbled to a folding chair outside near the door and sat down. With one elbow on the arm of the chair, she lay her head in her hand and wept. Sabre approached her and put a hand on her shoulder, but she didn’t know what to say. Betty continued to cry. Sabre looked back and saw Luke standing with his hands in his pockets by the pink geranium bush, watching her from a distance.
When Detective Nelson came out, he asked Betty for her name and the name of the victim, about what she had seen, and when. He wiggled the knot on his tie. “Sabre, would you mind getting Betty some clothes? We’ll need the pajamas.”
“Greg, is she a suspect?”
“Not at this point, but we need the pajamas. They have blood on them, and they may be evidence.” He turned to an officer standing at the door. “Please escort Ms. Brown inside. She needs to get a change of clothes for the victim’s wife.”
As Sabre entered the trailer she focused on two policemen walking around the living room with kits and brushes, dusting for fingerprints. She saw an officer pick up a knife from the sink, put it into a bag, and zip the bag closed. She watched as they opened drawers and cupboards, invading her friends’ home. She walked past the kitchen table containing the ceramic rooster, two placemats, and a deck of cards. She scanned the room for answers but saw only a worn, dark green sofa with two pillows, an end table next to it with a stack of loose newspapers and a pair of reading glasses, and Betty’s sketch book. A small desk across from the sofa housed a laptop computer. Only one picture adorned the wall, a drawing Betty had done of an old cabin in the woods, and except for the shelf with a small collection of salt and pepper shakers, the room contained very few mementos, an observation Sabre hadn’t made until now.
When they approached the bedroom, Sabre could see an officer taking photos. It hit her that something was missing. She looked around and saw only a few picture frames with photos, and none of them photos of Betty or John. She wondered how she had missed that before, and if it mattered.
Sabre continued to observe the officers as she gathered up Betty’s things. She looked around, processing every detail of each officer’s task. She watched as they bagged evidence-the pink rug with the blood stain, the book of matches from a Las Vegas casino, and the Viagra bottle by the side of the bed. It didn’t seem real. Never in her twenty-nine years of life, including her six years of practicing law, had Sabre seen anything so gruesome. She had dealt with many crime scenes in court, but she’d never seen an actual murdered body or the officers at work gathering the information on a crime. This was a corpse, not her friend whom she had known for five plus years and to whom she had grown very close. Emotions confused her-sadness for her friend John, concern for Betty, and fascination at the process she observed.
When she brought the clothes out to Betty, Detective Nelson approached her. “Sabre, will you and your friend….Lucas, is it?”
“Yes sir, Lucas, Luke Rahm,” Luke said.
“Will you two please meet me down at the station? I’d like to speak to each of you. I’ll take Betty with me.”
Up until this point, Sabre had been there as Betty’s friend, but Betty was a suspect, regardless of what Nelson said. Sabre realized she should be treating her like a client and advising her accordingly. She took a deep breath and cleared her head. She needed to think like an attorney. She didn’t have the luxury of being just a friend.
Sabre touched Betty gently on the shoulder. “Betty, you ride with Detective Nelson to the police station. I’ll be right behind you. Here are your clothes. And listen carefully to what I’m about to say. You do not talk to him,” she said, pointing at Nelson, “or to anyone else until I get there. Don’t say a word. Understand?”
“Do I have to go?”
“I’m afraid so. If you don’t, it’ll only be worse.”
“Sabre, I’m scared. I don’t want to go,” she pleaded. Sabre felt physical pain for her friend. Betty had been there for her so many times. She had held her when she cried for her missing brother. She had become family to her, an aunt she could confide in when she couldn’t talk to her mother. Simple yet worldly, Betty didn’t talk much about her past, but Sabre knew she had experienced some pretty rough times.
Sabre put one hand on each of Betty’s shoulders, looked her directly in the eye, and said, “I’m sorry, but they’ll take you one way or the other. Just go with Nelson, and please don’t say anything. Just tell them you’re waiting for me. Understand?”
“Okay,” Betty said, her chin buried in her chest as she walked to the car.
Sabre turned to Detective Nelson, “Greg, don’t question her without me. I’m her friend, but I’m also her attorney,” Sabre said sternly.
“We’re not arresting her,” he said.
“I know, but I’m shaken up about all this and about losing John, and I haven’t been thinking clearly either. Just give me a little time to get my act together here, too. A crime appears to have been committed. Betty and John are my friends and I don’t want anything to go wrong.”
“Your call. I’ll see you there in a few.”
Luke and Sabre maintained silence on the way to the station. With his left hand on the wheel, Luke reached with his right and put it on Sabre’s knee. She took a deep breath and sighed. She looked at Luke, his face solemn. She hadn’t really thought about the effect this had on him, but John and Betty were his friends, too. She squeezed his hand.
Sabre’s mind drifted back two months to when she first met Luke at a barbecue at Betty’s. Betty claimed she hadn’t been trying to set them up, but Sabre knew differently. When she arrived at their house, Betty sent Luke out to her car to help her bring in the ice. Sabre was smitten the moment she looked into his dark, bedroom eyes. He apparently felt the same because, after a few hours together that afternoon, he asked for her phone number. He called the next day, and within a few weeks they were exclusive.
A feeling of warmth came over her as she remembered that afternoon. John leaned over the barbeque to flip a burger. Betty brought him a beer. They both looked at Sabre and Luke, chuckled a little, and when Betty walked away, John tapped her lightly on the butt. Betty lunged forward a little. “Oof,” she said.
Sabre and Luke had driven on surface streets about five miles from the police station when Luke asked, “Are you okay?”
“Yeah, just trying to process everything.” She shifted in her seat. “Not such a great way to end the evening, our first time making love and all.”
“I know, baby, but I’m glad I was there with you.” He pulled her hand up to his lips and kissed it, holding it there for several seconds.
“Me, too.” She sighed. “I just feel so bad about John, and I’m so worried about Betty.”
“You don’t think she had anything to do with this, do you?”
Sabre responded with indignation that he would even ask. “Of course not. She wouldn’t hurt anyone, certainly not John. You know how much she loved him.” She looked at Luke, eyebrow raised. “Why, do you?”
“No…no, I don’t think so, either,” Luke said as he looked out the window, his voice trailing off.
“Besides, he must’ve been killed while Betty was with us. We’re her witnesses. We can vouch for her.”
“True.” Luke cleared his throat. “At least you can. I wasn’t with her the whole time. I was playing blackjack for a couple of hours while you two were off doing whatever it was you were doing. You were together, right?”
“Not the whole time. We went to play bingo, but then Betty decided she wanted to play the slots, so I stayed and she went to play the machines.” Sabre shifted in her seat and took a deep breath. “But she was there. I know she was there. I saw her about ten-thirty on the slots, and she told me she’d be leaving shortly.”
Silence filled the car the rest of the way to the police station.
Chapter 2
“Thank you for coming in, Sabre.”
“We shouldn’t even be here, Greg. She doesn’t know what happened.” Sabre tilted her head to one side and looked Nelson directly in the eye. “You think she killed him, don’t you?”
Detective Nelson loosened his tie. “I have no idea who killed him, but you know the drill, Sabre.” His voice softened. “I just need to ask her some questions.” He took Sabre by the arm. “Come on, let’s go talk to your client,” he said, as he led her to the interview room. The tiled floor resounded with the click of her heels as Sabre walked through the nearly empty corridor. When they reached the door, Detective Nelson opened it and held it for Sabre to pass. “Go on in. I’ll be there in just a second.”
Betty sat in the sparse interview room in the brown pants and the jailhouse orange, long-sleeve shirt Sabre had picked out for her. Sabre suddenly regretted her fashion choice for Betty. The bloody pajamas had been placed in the custody of the San Diego County Sheriff’s Department. The room contained only a table and two chairs, the dirty cream-colored walls needed paint, and the tile screamed “early fifties.” It resembled every other interview room in the county justice system-no windows and poor lighting.
“How are you holding up, Betty?” Sabre asked when they came in.
“Ok,” she said.
“Did they try to question you before I got here?”
“No, the officer just asked if I wanted something to drink. Nothing else.”
“Good.”
“What do they want from me?” Betty spit out the words as she stood up and ran her hand through her hair. “Oof,” she said bringing her hand down quickly.
“Right now they’re just trying to get information. Just tell the detective what you told me and hopefully we can get out of here. If I don’t like the questioning, I’ll stop it.”
“Do they think I had something to do with this?” Before Sabre could answer, Betty said. “I didn’t, you know.” She sounded so vulnerable and childlike.
“I know you didn’t,” Sabre was taken aback by Betty’s statement. “They need to start somewhere, and you were the last one with John as far as they know.”
Detective Nelson came in carrying another chair and seemed to take control of the room. He sat down and took Betty’s statement. “Why did you call Sabre and not the police?” Nelson asked.
“John was dead. I was upset.” Betty shrugged her shoulders. “I don’t know. She’s the first person I thought of.”
“Why didn’t you just call the police?”
“I don’t know.”
“Did you and your husband have a fight tonight?”
“No, we seldom fight,” Betty said assertively.
“Why didn’t he go to the casino with you?”
“He doesn’t gamble.”
“Does he ever go to the casino with you?”
“He’s been once or twice, but he gets bored, so when I go it’s usually with friends. I don’t go very often, either, a couple of times a year maybe.”
“Do you know anyone who might want your husband dead?”
“No.” Betty shook her head.
“Has he fought with anyone recently? Neighbors? Fellow workers?”
“No, not that I’m aware of.” Betty’s brow wrinkled. “He never fought with anyone. Everyone loved him. Sabre and Luke loved him. I loved him. Everyone loved him.”
“I’m sure they did, but why didn’t you call the police when you found him?” Nelson asked again.
“I don’t know.”
“What time did you last see John?”
“Around six-thirty. We usually eat dinner around that time, but I fixed John’s dinner a little early because of my plans to eat with Sabre and Luke. John ate about six and I cleaned up the kitchen and left. I left in such a hurry, I didn’t even kiss him goodbye.” Betty began to cry.
Nelson stopped his questioning for a moment and then asked, “Did he seem upset about anything before you left?”
“N..No.”
“Did you talk to him after that?”
“No,” Betty sucked the air in through her nose, stifling her cry. Sabre brought her a Kleenex, glancing at Nelson out of the corner of her eye.
“What time did you get home?” Nelson asked.
“About eleven P.M.”
“But you didn’t notice there was a problem until this morning?”
“No, I thought he was asleep.”
“When you saw the blood, why didn’t you call the police?”
“Greg, she said she didn’t know,” Sabre interrupted. “She was in shock when I got there.” Nelson looked at his notes and Sabre continued. “She’s answered all your questions. Most of them more than once. May we go home now?”
“Yeah, we’re done for now.”
Sabre, Luke, and Betty left the police station heading west on I-8, the morning commuter traffic in full force. Sabre, afraid she would be late for court, called her friend Bob and asked him to cover until she arrived.
“I’m taking you to my house, Betty. You can get some rest there. Luke will stay with you. He has his computer so he can work from there today.” Sabre turned to Luke so Betty couldn’t see her and mouthed, “Thank you.”
Luke winked back at her.
“Sure,” Betty responded, wringing her hands together. “Whatever you think.”
Sabre arrived at court about ten-thirty. The parking lot was full, so she had to park in the dirt and walk past Juvenile Hall. With an arm full of files, dressed in her black power suit and her Gucci high-heeled pumps, Sabre rushed to the courthouse. Inside at the metal detector, the bailiff waved her through. She walked across the crowded hallway and set her files on her usual shelf, one that protruded from the wall near the information desk.
Bob tapped her on the shoulder. “Hey, Ms. Sabre Orin Brown. How’s my little Sobs this morning?” Sobs was Bob’s nickname for Sabre. Sometimes he called her his little S.O.B. He loved to tease her about her initials.
Sabre managed a smile. She looked at her friend and thought how much he reminded her of the actor, Bill Pullman, but with prematurely-gray hair. He wasn’t movie star gorgeous, but was still devilishly cute, and he delivered his lines with great finesse. “I’m hanging in there.”
“Well, I’m glad you’re here. It’s been a crazy morning.”
“Yeah, tell me about it.” Sabre didn’t look up at her friend but she felt better just having him near. Sabre and Bob met when they both started working juvenile about six years ago. They had their first jurisdictional trial together, which they won, and soon after discovered that winning was no easy task. Their work at juvenile court and their deep compassion for the children bonded them. They were best friends, but they never gave Bob’s wife, Marilee, anything to worry about.
“Hey, are you okay? What’s going on? And why are you late?”
“You know my friend Betty, the little red-headed spitfire?”
“Yeah, I’ve seen her a few times. Why?”
“Her husband, John, is dead. He was murdered last night.”
“Murdered?” Bob said loudly, as he placed his hand on Sabre’s shoulder. “How?”
“Someone stabbed him in his bed. When Betty came home from the casino, John was apparently already dead. Betty didn’t know it until she rose to go to the bathroom and found blood on her pajamas. Luke and I went over there as soon as she called. We’ve been at the police station most of the night.”
“Do they know who did it?”
“Not yet. Remember Detective Greg Nelson from the Murdock case?”
“Yes.”
“He’s one of the investigating officers, and I’m glad, because he treated her better than someone else may have.”
“Are they accusing her of the murder?”
“No, at least not yet, but they don’t have any other suspects.”
“Attorneys Brown and Clark, please report to Department Four.” Mike, the bailiff, announced their surnames over the intercom.
“I guess we better go,” Bob said. “I did a couple of your reviews in Department One, but I haven’t done anything yet in Four.”
Bob and Sabre hustled into Department Four. Mike, her favorite bailiff, was assigned to this department. Apart from being good looking and intelligent, he was also a dedicated father. He asked, “What shenanigans are you two wild and crazy ones up to this morning?”
“The usual,” Bob answered. “Wreaking havoc in Kiddie Court.”
Mike shook his head. “Like we’d expect anything else.” He turned to Sabre. “Brown, you ready?”

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By Barbara Ebel MD

 

Copyright 2009, 2011 by Barbara Ebel and reprinted here with her permission.
Chapter 1
–  2009  –
    Through the desolate winter woods, she could see a run down single story house.  She firmly pressed the accelerator to climb the hilly, rutted road as pebbles kicked up from the gravel, pinging underneath her sedan. All around her, tall spindly trees stood without a quiver, the area still, quiet and remote. On this damp, cold February afternoon, she had come to conclude a deal with a man named Ray.
    The road narrowed past the house, fading over the hill, but she veered slowly to the left, a barren area in front of the peeling house, where a dusty red pickup truck stood idle and a black plumaged vulture busily scavenged. Deliberately she left her belongings, clicked the lock on her car and walked to the front door. She threw the long end of her rust scarf behind her shoulder. The raptor grunted through his hooked beak as he flew off to the backwoods. The door opened before she knocked.
    “Nobody visits a feller like me,” the man said, smiling at her while adjusting his baseball cap, “unless we’re buying and selling. You must be the lady with the book.”
    The tidily shaven man wore a salt and pepper colored beard and mustache and an open plaid cotton shirt with a tee shirt underneath. The boots peeking out from under his blue jeans had seen muddy days.
    The woman smiled pleasantly at him and went in the front door empty handed. If the man had any furniture, she wasn’t aware of it. Car parts lay strewn everywhere, which made her wonder if he slept in a bed.
    Ray followed her glance. “You nearly can’t find one of them no mores,” he said, pointing to a charcoal colored, elongated piece of vinyl plastic on the floor. She looked quizzically at him and shoved the woolen hat she’d been wearing into her pocket.
    “It’s an original 1984 Mercedes dashboard. See, the holes are for vents and the radio. Got a bite on that one from a teenager restoring his first car.” She didn’t seem interested though. She eyed the dust, in some spots thick as bread.
    “Are you sure you have twelve-thousand dollars to pay for this?” she asked, unbuttoning her jacket.
    “You come out thirty miles from Knoxville? That baby in your belly may need something,” he said, pointing to her pregnancy. “You want a soda or something?”
    “No thank you,” she said, grimacing at him.
     “Oh, yeah. I got the money,” he said. “All I got now to my name is seventy-five thousand dollars. I got ruint in Memphis. Was a part owner in a used car dealership. Went away for a little while, and the other guy cleaned me out. Can’t afford nothing like a lawyer to chase ‘im down.”
    She tapped her foot.
    “Anyhow, I won’t bother yer with all that. I got a thing going good on eBay. I got a reputation, it ain’t soiled. You can trust me, I give people what I tell them, whether I’m buying or selling.”
    A beagle-looking mutt crawled out from behind a car door. “Molly, you’re milk containers are dragging on the floor. Better get out to your pups,” the man said, prodding her out the partially closed door.
    “You like dogs?” he asked.
    “I suppose so.”
    “I got no use for people who don’t care for dogs. Something not right about people like that.”
    The woman turned and followed the clumsy dog outside, grabbed a bag from the front seat, and came back in. She took out a book, opened the back cover, and handed him a folded piece of paper. Certificate of Authenticity, the man read, from a company in New Orleans, verifying the signature on the front page to be Albert Einstein’s. He inverted his hand and wiggled his fingers, gesturing to her if he could hold the aged book.
    “Where’d you say you got it?” He observed her carefully.
    “It’s been in the family for years. I took my precious belongings with me when I left New Orleans because of Hurricane Katrina. Since I lost my house there, I decided to stay in Tennessee. Now I’m selling my expensive things. I have to make ends meet, especially with a baby coming.”   
    “Good thing you got this certificate with it, then. Twelve-thousand dollars, we’ve got a deal.”
    He walked away to the back of the house while she held on to the physicist’s 1920 publication. He came through the doorway with a stack of money and a brown paper bag. She nodded once when she finished counting the bills, so he handed her the empty bag.
    “I still got your email address and phone number,” he said. “I keep track of what goes and comes.”

    “You won’t need them,” she said and left abruptly.  

    He watched her back out, stood there until the car disappeared out of sight down the gray road. 
 
Chapter 2
– 1989 –
    “You dawdling over there?”
    “No. Peeing, Dad.” Danny zipped his fly and wheeled around, his boots sinking in soft leafy earth. His father, Greg, stood on polished creek stone at the river’s edge beside Danny’s wife. “And on rounds, the proper term is urinating.” Danny slipped from the woods and approached them.
    Greg threw a few red salmon eggs into the Caney Fork River and handed Danny his spinning rod. “I better catch up to the better half of you newlyweds.”  
    Sara propped her pole on the cooler, held up a rainbow trout in front of Danny, and exclaimed “Tah-dah.”
    “We’re just here to have fun.” Danny grinned at both of them. “It’s not as if our lives depend on it.” But Danny knew the Tennessee Wildlife Resources Agency had recently stocked the river. The three of them had been bottom fishing since before the morning fog lifted like a friendly ghost drifting away to expose the slow but noticeable current.
    “You’re right, Danny. You know what I say.”
    Sara plucked algae off her four-pound test line and looked questioningly at her father-in-law. She waited to wade into the water, figuring one of Greg’s metaphorical sayings or idioms were forthcoming. She’d dated Danny throughout his four years of medical school at Vanderbilt and had spent so much time at his Dad’s house, where Danny had lived, that sometimes more lipsticks and tampons had been in Danny’s bathroom than her own.   
    “You may want to fish for dinner,” Greg said, “but if you must fish to catch dinner, you’ve screwed up.”
    Sara pushed dew-misted hair behind her ear. “Danny’s one of only two residents they’ve accepted into the neurosurgery program, Dad. That doesn’t qualify as, umm, messing up.”
    Danny beamed at his wife. During med school, almost two dozen students were already married or headed that way, but some couples split with the strain of exams and deadlines, hours in labs, physician’s offices and clinical rotations with overnight calls. Sara kept busy teaching high school biology and running, and always helped Danny focus. When he needed long-term perspective, objectivity, or softening after his brain was slammed shut for hours between pages of Principles ofPharmacology, she could turn him around. She would run her hand through his hair, or massage between his shoulder blades, or whisper to him under the sheets after they made love.      When they took their vows a month ago, Danny secretly promised to nourish the effect they had on each other.
    Greg had forgotten to bring wading boots, so he stayed on shore while Sara and Danny carefully picked their steps. Occasional diehards just sucked it up and waded in. The water was as warm as it would get, a cold summer temperature, unforgiving for anyone without proper gear.  
    Quiet spread across their sanctuary except for a small surface splash or a fish tail grazing the surface. A young man in a small canoe paddled by and without any fanfare hoisted his baby boat onto a jeep rack and left.
    Danny and Sara finally came to shore, each with a brown trout. “Both about the same size,” Sara said. Danny agreed, leaned over and pecked his wife on the cheek as they crouched, holding their fish like new baby birds. The trout squirmed in their hands, then darted away. Sara smiled, pleased with their release.  
     “Time to go Dad. They’ll be generating soon.” Danny nodded at the Center Hill Dam, the nearby Goliath. Sara picked up their poles and Danny and Greg grabbed the unused salmon eggs, cooler, and tackle boxes; they walked slowly up the road to the parking lot as they heard the generating dam gushing Center Hill Lake water into the Caney Fork.
    “This is the last load, Dad,” Danny said.
     Greg waved his hand as Danny walked by him with a flat cardboard box and suitcase and entered his bedroom. Inside, ebony blue curtains framed windows to a view that appeared as if by magic despite his mother’s illness. She had died three years ago from ovarian cancer.
    Danny looked out over south facing slopes of grown hickories, southern red oaks and maples, white and Virginia pines. Donna had assisted the native habitat by producing a real show for early spring. She’d worked with Mexican migrants from a wholesale nursery to plant rows of redbuds and terraced beds of mountain laurel, rhododendrons and wildflowers. Specks of white, hints of pink and tinges of purple had helped her to divert thoughts of a possible short life expectancy to reminiscing about her family and their accomplishments. She would leave behind a wonderful marriage, two fantastic children, and a beautiful estate.
    Danny turned his head to find Greg at his doorway. “I miss her, Dad. There’s not a day …”
    “Me, too,” Greg said, gazing at his shoes, his thick dark eyebrows practically covering his eyes. “I still can’t believe I’m without her at fifty-two years old.”
    Greg walked in and sat on Danny’s bed, his shoulders slumping over. Greg had gotten married in 1960, after only dating Donna for six months. They never missed Sunday devotion together until Donna had been bedridden. Greg’s gaze averted to the outside hallway where one of his wedding pictures hung, the loving couple fixed in an embrace.
    “You know what I told her?”  
    Danny shook his head no.
    “A girlfriend who prays with me is worth keeping.”
    Danny did know that, as well as the adoration his father had shown his mother for as long as he could remember. He patted his father’s knee once and got up. Danny unfolded the cardboard box, and then dumped it in front of his dresser.
    “Dad, Sara and I can’t thank you enough for the wedding present. The house is home already. Sara’s summer vacation and my break before residency made it all work out.” Danny looked around. “Will you turn my room into a guest bedroom?”
    “Yes. And I’ll keep it the same. For visiting grandkids?”
    Danny laughed. “Are you prying, Dad?”
    “If there are plans for me to be a grandfather, I want to be the third one to know.”
    “Done deal,” Danny said, checking his top drawers to make sure he’d emptied them on a previous trip. He opened the last drawer and threw his winter stash of sweaters into the box. A large baggie still sat at the bottom, which Danny picked up, then sat next to Greg on the cream-colored bedspread. The mattress indented with their weight and their knees lined up together, their six foot two frames carbon copied from similar blueprints.
    Danny’s eyes gleamed. Greg reached to touch the plastic storage bag, an uncanny method to preserve the emotionally stirring and valuable treasure. Danny opened the bag and took out the brown hard-covered book as gently as he had held a hummingbird the previous week after he had found it stunned from hitting Sara and Danny’s glass front door. He placed the small item on his lap and opened the faded cover to the yellowish tinge of aged paper.
    “Your sister will wear your mom’s jewelry,” Greg said, “but you? Someday you can bequeath what your mother gave you to your children or a museum. Or sell it.”
    Danny whistled, knowing it’s price tag would have plenty of zeroes, with more added as time went on.
    “I still remember when your mother purchased it. She drove a hard bargain and requested that the store manager in New Orleans have the book and the signature verified by an authenticator of such things.”
    They both looked at the front page: Einstein’s 1920 Relativity: The Special and the General Theory. Many copies existed, but this was one of the few remaining from the early 1900’s. Two-thirds down on the page was the author’s signature: Albert Einstein. Which wasn’t the usual way the historical genius had autographed his books. Almost always, he had signed A. Einstein.
    “It’s the real McCoy,” Greg said.  “And with Einstein’s full signature, you’ve inherited a diamond in a trowel of white sand.” Danny slid it back in the bag. “Perhaps you should put it in a safe deposit box.”
    “Perhaps. But occasionally I look at it, Dad. I think of Mom.” Danny paused, looking again to the summer’s day, tree shadows beginning their leftward crawl. “It’s inspiration for entering a field where I’ll surgically be in the very matter which spawns incredible ideas and discoveries like his.”
    When Greg left, Danny packed the last shirts and shoes left in his closet, a few medical texts in the nightstand and a bottle of Sara’s shampoo from his bathroom. He opened it and smiled. Orange ginger. Sara’s hair.
    Danny glumly endured his first postgraduate year, then six months of general surgery, a few months of neurology and one month of neuro ICU. He knew how important these rotations were for establishing his clinical knowledge and skills; but he couldn’t wait to focus on physical brains, the control panel of it all. As he tolerated these months, he tried to listen to Greg, who kept telling him, “It’s not the end result, but the journey that matters.”
    Finally, late in his second year of residency, Danny was smack in the middle of his first true month of neurosurgery. He pushed through hospital health care providers in scrubs, police officers, and uniformed ambulance personnel in the ER hallway, to see three stretchers in the trauma room. Someone yanked at his arm.
    “Dr. Tilson, the one in between. The anesthesiologist is intubating the difficult airway over there, the driver. The ER physician will probably declare that patient on the right, another driver who went off the road to avoid them.” The navy blue uniformed man, the same age as Danny, spoke quickly and sped Danny to the head of the middle stretcher.
    Danny had already begun assessing the patient while gesturing for the young man to continue. “This patient. Right front seat, wasn’t wearing a seatbelt. A ten-pointer buck ran from the ditch, driver slammed the brakes, trophy rack came through the front window. Brown body and appendages followed. She was talking when I arrived, but became somnolent en route. To be on the safe side, I intubated her.”
    Danny glanced at the monitors. Vital signs okay, but not great. Dirty, dark blood covered the sheet and neck brace behind the motionless woman’s head. He slipped on gloves and felt around the endotracheal tube protruding from the patient’s mouth, palpating facial bones for stability and orbital area for swelling. Danny checked her pupil size and reaction to light. A general surgeon had arrived and simultaneously examined her abdomen and chest. They assessed quietly despite the chaos around them.
    Danny finished, stepped back to a tray covered with the patient’s ER paperwork and grabbed physician order and progress sheets. “I’m going to need a non-contrast CT scan of the brain,” he said to the general surgeon and nearby nurse.
    The surgeon nodded. “Looks negative down here.” A gloved nurse waited for Danny’s other orders.
   “Nice job, driver,” Danny said to the man who had given him report. He pressed ahead with his writing without looking at him.
    “I’m not just an ambulance driver,” the man said sarcastically, “but a highly trained EMT. A paramedic. And unlike you, I’m launched in my career. You’ll be pussyfooting around for the next five years before getting yourself established.”
    The female nurse didn’t move.
    “Shut up, Casey,” Danny said with a small grin.
    The nurse exhaled. “Phew. I thought you two were for real.”  She untwisted a pretty ivory earring.
    “We’re throw backs to grade school. It’s just that he never grew up.” Danny glanced sideways at Casey. “And I still think you should’ve been a quarterback. Thick neck, muscular build and all.”
    Before Casey could open his mouth, Danny continued, “I’m not touching a book tonight, so pop over. Sara and I could use some deck time.”
    “Okay. For Sara. But don’t let that baby fall asleep until I see her awake. What do you two do, tranquilize her?”
    “That’s what babies do, Casey, they sleep.”
    Casey weaved out of the trauma room through the diminishing gawkers. As the patient’s stretcher rolled past, Danny paged his chief resident to give her a report.
    “When the CT is finished, meet me in radiology,” Dr. Welch said.
    Chief residents, in their final sixth year of neurological surgery, were in charge of lower residents and had an attending physician available for counsel. Danny had an appreciation for Dr. Welch, a thick waisted, fast talking female whose gender in her specialty made her rarer than lobster ice cream.
    Karen Welch stood in the CT scanning office when Danny arrived. She had evaluated the patient before they had transported her to the ICU. She glanced up and down the CT images on the viewer, hands on her hips.
    “Dr. Tilson, glad you could join me. So your college bound, buck startled patient has a high-density area on CT,” she said, pointing.
    Danny carefully looked through the images, careful not to let Karen bait him into hurrying the probable diagnosis, or missing something else evident.
    “A cerebral contusion from a sudden deceleration of the head.”
    “Is there more to that story?”
    Danny took a step off the imaging room’s platform to establish better eye contact. “The brain impacted on bony prominences. A coup injury occurred where the skull struck the brain. A contrecoup injury is an injury directly opposite the impact site.”
    Karen Welch turned to her resident. “Surgical treatment is not indicated at this time. When will surgical decompression be warranted?”
    “With threatening herniation. If she becomes refractory to medical management. With increased ICP.”
    “Ah, yes. The magic three letters for increased intracranial pressure. You know what to do.” She winked at the radiologist sitting in front of his equipment.
    She handed Danny the patient’s chart from the table and began walking out. “I’ll talk to the general surgery resident. Most of the patient’s scalp wounds are only a few inches. They can clean and suture them without bringing the patient to the OR.”
    That evening, Danny left Vanderbilt University Hospital and traveled southeast to the wedding present Greg had given them almost two years ago. Greg had hired the builder, but Danny and Sara had approved the plans and construction, giving the builder lots of latitude with his work. Since they chose a lot in a newborn subdivision, their split-level ranch at the end of a cul-de-sac faced woods in the back. Danny and Sara liked the outdoor, natural environment and had a wooden deck built on the front and back of the single story side of the house.  
    Danny hit the remote and pulled his four-year old Toyota into the garage. “Hi girls,” he said, entering the door. Melissa sat in her high chair, her right hand swinging a red rattle, the other hand holding a small white stuffed dog with a ribbon collar. She shook with glee when she planted her eyes on Danny. Sara graded the sprawling papers in front of her but got up to meet Danny halfway.
    Danny put his right arm around Sara, pressing his head into her blonde peppered hair. Her bob cut accentuated the contour of her cheeks and her silky hair made him linger and revel in its fragrance. He pulled back. Sometimes her hair stayed behind her ears, but sometimes she’d purposefully leave it up front and kink it softly around her face. Danny liked it either way.
    “Good day, night and day?” Sara asked.